Voice, Style and Grammar

I’m tired and busy, so here’s a neat writing link:

Kristine Kathryn Rusch on voice and why it is important for writers and storytellers. The first half of the post is about the Borders bankruptcy, you have to scroll down (or read the Borders stuff, since it is interesting, even if you’re not in the US) to get to the voice bit.

Kristine Kathryn Rusch’s Business Rusch series is excellent in general and required reading for anyone interested in the publishing industry.

However, the voice post resonated with me in particular, because it lays down the difference between grammatically correct writing and what is assumed to be “good style” (and what is considered good or bad writing varies according to culture and fashion anyway) and voice.

This doesn’t mean that – as some commenters seem to believe – that knowing the rules of grammar, punctuation, POV, effective writing, etc… is unimportant, because it is not. But you should have – and if you’ve ever been one of my students, you would have – learned the basics of that in highschool.

Voice is different, because it’s a person’s very unique way of expressing him- or herself. And it’s not necessarily linked to technical proficiency. I’ve had several students who had grammar and spelling issues, sometimes quite severe, but who still displayed a unique and notable voice in creative writing assignments. In fact, the two students that had the strongest writing voices both had language, spelling and grammar issues. Both also happened to be dyslexic. In one case, the student’s spoken vocabulary far exceeded her written vocabulary, so she kept spelling unfamiliar words phonetically. If you came across a strangely spelled word in her work, you had to read it out loud to know what she meant. Yet she obviously had a lot of writing talent for a 13-year-old.

Another thing about voice is that it’s almost impossible to change. You can deliberately alter your style, but you cannot change your voice, at least not for long.

Some time ago, I found myself frustrated by rejections and decided to try writing a bit of short fiction in the pseudo-lyrical/poetic style that I saw in many SFF short fiction markets. So I started writing. Within a couple of paragraphs, the voice started to sound like my own again, rather than the writers I was imitating, and the story turned into a parody of a certain kind of SFF story. As a result, I know have a text that’s very funny – at least to me – but not marketable at all.

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German TV Parodies… and Authorized Slash!

This is hilarious. Clips from classic German TV shows reassembled and redubbed at ZDF mashups.

I particularly love the slashy take on Derrick. I mean, it’s a slashy video featuring two beloved TV characters, not just authorized by the copyright holder but even posted on their website. How great is that? And who would have guessed that someone at the ZDF, often nicknamed the station for the 70 to 99 demographic, not only knows that there is such a thing is slash, but also manages not to drop dead at the mere thought that Derrick and Harry could… gasp… be a couple. It makes sense, too, because Derrick and Harry never really had anything resembling a personal life, though Derrick did have a girlfriend in one episode.

I also got a good giggle from the immoral alternate versions of noble Professor Brinkmann* from Schwarzwaldklinik and the equally noble Dr. Burger, the Alpine medic from Der Bergdoktor, probably because the originals were always so incredibly noble and selfless that it’s just plain fun to see them redubbed as money-grubbing bastards. Besides, Klausjürgen Wussow (who played Professor Brinkmann) could play a great villain, as proved by the Edgar Wallace film Der Rote Kreis.

The Traumschiff parody is very mean. Angela Merkel orders the cruise ship captain to maroon welfare recipients on a desert island to balance her budget. In the end, she also orders him to maroon several cabinet ministers.

Finally, the Peter Lustig from Löwenzahn loses his job and contemplates a new career clip is just hilarious. The fake credits are a particularly nice touch.

However, what stuns me most is that those clips can be found on the official ZDF, i.e. the network that originally broadcast those shows, website and that the ZDF authorized them. Who would have thought that the staid old ZDF had a sense of humour? And that they could actually be cool?

*What exactly was he professor of, anyway, considering that his fictional hospital in the Black Forest was far from every university with a medical faculty and teaching hospital?

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World Travel Meme

Gacked from Jay Lake.


visited 31 states (13.7%)
Create your own visited map of The World

Not too bad, but then I grew up with a father who had to travel a lot for his job. Lots of Europe and North America and a few scattered countries in Asia. I have included airport stopovers, that’s where Iceland and the red spots in the Gulf region (namely United Arab Emirates and Bahrain) come from, since planes bound for South East Asia usually make a stopover in the Gulf region.

And now for the USA:


visited 16 states (32%)
Create your own visited map of The United States

Unsurprisingly, most of my time in the USA was spent in the South East with a little bit in the North East. I have quite literally (as in stood on the bank and looked across) never been further west than the Rio Grande.

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The End of a Legend

I just went to the Guardian website to check reviews for a new British TV show and was shocked to see that British actor Nicholas Courtney died yesterday aged 81.

Nicholas Courtney is best known for playing Brigadier Alistair Gordon Lethbridge-Stewart in the original Doctor Who. He was the longest serving actor in the series, appearing opposite all seven original Doctors. Well, he only appeared with the Sixth Doctor in a Doctor Who meets Eastenders charity short and some audio dramas, but I guess we can count that one. I’ve also seen him in many other British shows, e.g. in All Creatures Great and Small or The Avengers, but for me and many others he will always be the Brigadier. Continue reading →

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Two Quick Writing Links

I’m busy and tired, plus I have an important meeting early tomorrow, so here are two writing links in lieu of a proper post:

Stacia Kane explains what lies behind that annoying writing advice “Write what you know”

Lynn Viehl discusses creative places at Paperback Writer.

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Quick Link Round-up on the Usual Suspects – err, Subjects

I’m still busy, so here’s a quick link roundup:

The doctorate of Karl Theodor zu Guttenberg has been revoked by the university of Bayreuth because of academic malfeasance.

Eric Rosenfield weighs in on the nihilism in epic fantasy issue at Wet Asphalt. For Rosenfield, this whole conflict very much boils down to political differences.

It’s true that the two sides in this debate largely align along political faultlines, but I still find this argument a bit reductionist. Just as not everybody who enjoys the darker and grittier fantasy of Joe Abercrombie, George R.R. Martin or Matthew Stover is a member of the decadent nihilist society for world domination and decline, not everybody who wants the occasional character to root for and does not want to read fantasy fiction about people tortured and murdered in graphic detail is automatically a rightwing reactionary either. Speculative fiction is a big genre with room for conservatives, communists and everything in between. And that’s a very good thing.

Finally, I also have issues with the fact that he calls Stephenie Meyer a religious fundamentalist. Yes, we all know that Stephenie Meyer is Mormon and that her religious worldview informs her writing. However, unlike Orson Scott Card, Stephenie Meyer has never used her popularity as a writer to further the political agenda of her church. Card did speak out on gay rights and other issues repeatedly, which is why many people refuse to read him. But so far Stephenie Meyer has kept her political opinions to herself. She’s just a fantasy writer who happens to be Mormon. And frankly, the fact that she is constantly reduced to her religion is getting very wearying.

Adrian Faulkner weighs in that debates of this kind quickly degenerate into reflexive Tolkien bashing just as any debate about urban fantasy, paranormal romance and even YA fantasy quickly degenerates into reflexive Stephenie Meyer bashing.

At the New York Times, Haruki Murakami writes about the difference between the 20th and 21st centuries, about shifting perceptions and realities and what all that means for fiction. Definitely a very interesting article, though I don’t fully agree with him. It’s also quite pertinent to the current epic fantasy discussion.

Mark Charan Newton has a nice post on worldbuilding. I particularly like his point that in his experience the fictional history created by British fantasy writers tends to be more extensive than that created by American fantasy writers.

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A Rememberance of German Crime Drama

German TV producer Helmut Ringelmann has died at age 84. Ringelmann created several long running crime dramas such as Derrick, Der Alte and Der Kommissar in the 1960s and 1970s.

Ringelmann’s crime dramas were a fixture of Friday nights when I was growing up and for me as well as for many other Germans they were our first contact with the crime genre. In my case, it was an episode of Der Alte, when he was still played by Siegfried Lowitz. It was a grave disappointment, in the end Kommissar Köster did not even arrest the killer. Derrick was a little better, he was slightly younger for starters, occasionally got involved in an actual chase and even fell in love once in a memorable episode broadcast in December 1983. Okay, so it was mainly memorable for the Return of the Jedi preview broadcast after Derrick, but it was still a pretty good episode. With Der Alte, on the other hand, you were always worried that he would suffer a heart attack, if he ever actually had to chase down a criminal.

As it was, the days when being allowed to stay up on a Friday night to watch Derrick or Der Alte was a much welcomed treat faded as I hit puberty. Indeed, the staid pacing of Ringelmann’s crime dramas was already outdated in the 1970s, which became painfully apparent when Schimanski burst onto the scene in 1981 with his foul mouth, bad temper, working class background and more energy in a single scene than in five episodes of Derrick taken together. Indeed, it is pretty much impossible to understand the revolution that was Schimanski without having seen Derrick or Der Alte or any pre-Schimanski episode of Tatort first. Because this was what German crime drama looked like in the 1970s, 1980s and even continues to look like today, if you watch certain programs.

I still remember how Schimanski blew my mind – by running over a red light to the protests of his long suffering partner Tanner. A policeman – disregarding a red light! Derrick would never have done that – he didn’t even drive, his assistant Harry did. While Der Alte would have died from a heart attack on the spot. This was a moment that I understood that I was watching something new, something different, something quite unlike anything I’d ever seen on German TV before. I quickly lost interest in the bland dullness of Derrick and Der Alte afterwards. Shortly, thereafter I discovered the vastly bigger excitement offered by American crime drama and turned my back on Ringelmann’s Friday night crime shows for good.

However, it is precisely the staid pacing, the lack of overt violence (the early episodes of Derrick were quite violent for the time, but the violence was toned down after complaints in the early 1970s) and the almost robot-like investigators of Ringelmann’s crime dramas that proved popular with audiences abroad. Derrick remains the most broadcast German program in the world, popular in places as far as China, Iran and South Africa, and Der Alte is not far behind. And even at home, vintage episodes of Der Kommissar, Derrick and Der Alte have long turned from corny to cult. Of course, nowadays the main appeal lies in the vintage cars and clothes and interiors and what passed for socially conscious programming in the 1970s.

In the end Ringelmann’s formula for television crime drama turned out to be successful enough to work for 24 (Derrick) or respectively 34 (Der Alte) years. His programs have become such cultural touchstones, that it has become impossible to imagine a Friday evening without Der Alte, Derrick and other programs in a similar vein. He will be missed.

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Awards, writing links and yet more plagiarism in politics and nihilism in fantasy

I’m busy with school prep work and a big translation project, one of those 100 plus page operation manuals, that just came in. So here is a link round-up:

Today, my local paper published an insightful interview with Andreas Fischer-Lescarno, the law professor at Bremen university who broke the Guttenberg plagiarism scandal. Unfortunately, only a short excerpt of the interview is online and the comment section is full of pro-Guttenberg trolls.

Anyway, to sum it up, Professor Fischer-Lescarno came across Guttenberg’s dissertation, because it fell into his field of specialty, international and constitutional law. He intended to review the dissertation for an academic law journal and found it somewhat lacking and uneven. There was one passage, where he felt the argument was particularly weak, so he plugged it into Google, thinking that Guttenberg had borrowed the argument from one of his own political speeches (which would not be illegal, you are allowed to plagiarize yourself). Instead, he hit plagiarism paydirt. For his troubles, he has been inundated with hate mails and has been called green-leftist propagandist. Because one obviously cannot care about academic honesty and quality without a political agenda.

On to the second hot topic of the day, Juliette Wade discusses the current epic fantasy debate in a cultural and anthropological context. Of all the many posts made on this issue in the past few days, including several by yours truly, this is my favourite.

The Nebula Award nominations have been announced.

I haven’t read several of the nominated works and don’t necessarily agree with those I have, but that is a nice, diverse list there. I am particularly pleased by the many women nominated. There is no fiction category entirely without female writers and in the novel category, five of six writers nominated are women. This is a very good development, particularly considering that only a few years ago there was a Hugo shortlist with only one or two female nominees in the fiction categories altogether.

Terry Windling has a lovely post on creativity and how to attract the muses.

Shanna Swendson has a nice post on the differences between writing short stories and novels.

I’m in a similar boat to her, though I have actually managed to sell some short stories. Nonetheless, my writing generally tends long. Very few of my stories are actually short, quite a few push 8000, 10000 or even 12000 words. I also have a handful of pieces that started out as short stories and then morphed into completely unmarketable novella lengths. Maybe I’ll revise those unmarketable novellas some day and see if I can do more with them (especially since some of them were quite good) now that e-publishing has eroded many of the old length restrictions.

In the past few months, I’ve also tried to push myself and write shorter pieces and even flash fiction as well. Not every attempt goes somewhere, some ideas just fizzle out, while others clearly want a larger scope. But the advantage of writing shorts and flash is that the time investment is low, they make for a good palate cleanser and there are a lot of markets for them.

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Channel Surfing Weirdness

Sometimes, while flipping through the channels on the TV remote, you can come across some really weird stuff. I had two or rather three moments of channel surfing weirdness today:

  1. Suddenly coming across what was undoubtedly the Eleventh Doctor chatting up a Nazi in full uniform in a men’s toilet. So the Doctor chats up Nazis in toilets now, but he still won’t give Jack what Jack has wanted since the end of season 1 of the new series?Actually, the truth is a lot more prosaic, because the scene I saw turned out to be from Christopher and His Kind, a 2010 biopic about the young Christopher Isherwood (played by Matt Smith), which arte aired as part of their Christopher Isherwood theme evening. Three guesses what the rest of the Christopher Isherwood theme evening consisted of.
  2. Coming across a scene from a very bad German soap opera where the resident bitch (I sometimes have that show on as background noise while grading papers, so I know she is the resident bitch) is lying in bed with her stableboy lover, just as her blind fiance, blinded in – I kid you not – a riding accident, walks in. The rest of the scene, which was undoubtedly intended to be dramatic but really funny as hell, has the stableboy trying to sneak out of the room, being as quiet as possible, so the blind fiance won’t notice what’s up.
  3. Since this show can be incredibly awesome in its sheer absurdity, I left it on, even though I have no papers to grade at the moment and was rewarded by two other characters sharing a tender moment. Just as he is about to lift her top, there is a cut to a very phallic church steeple.
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See the stats shoot up – Yet more on plagiarism, nihilist fantasy, thrillers and blogging

My website stats have really been exploding these past few days. Yesterday was the busiest day since the revamp/return of this blog in October 2010 with 103 visitors according to the WordPress stats plug-in. Most people seem to have come for the fantasy discussions, but I also got some hits on the Guttenberg posts and relevant search terms. Continue reading →

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